Dear Readers,

The first draft of America’s First Daughter was 240,000 words – and the final book is 198,000 words.¬†We deleted scenes for a variety of reasons – sometimes they didn’t move the story along, sometimes they were repetitve of other scenes, sometimes they were too tangential to Patsy’s personal experiences, and sometimes the goal of the scene could be accomplished in a better way. Some of the scenes we cut were among our favorites, including a scene where Jefferson engages in an excavation of an Indian burial mound, an activity that earned him the distinction of being known as the Father of American Archaeology, and a scene where Patsy experiences an earthquake in Philadelphia. Stephanie and I will share those scenes with you here and at our joint site, so check back for new additions. And please note, deleted scenes posted on this website have not gone through the detailed fact-checking conducted on the material in the final book.

 

Available Scenes:

HE IS HANDSOME – Patsy reacts to Tom Randolph’s interest…

COLONEL RANDOLPH – Tom Randolph’s father gives Patsy a message…

POLLY FALLS – Polly Jefferson falls through the floor at Monticello…

Enjoy!

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